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Save MeI am lost deep within
Cannot find my way out
Silently crying in despair
I can hear only echoes
Of my unheard pleads

My voice is slowly fading
This sore throat failing me
Eyes cannot see through
Where did the light go

I feel my blood pouring
Running down my body
As I tremble weakly
Pain is holding me awake

They left me all alone
Trapped me down here
In the bitter cold
Freezing ice under me
It's slowly...
Making me numb

Save me
I'm dying

Save me with your love

*Mars*Travelling fast, speed of light
Course is plotted, Mars tonight
Red planet sojourn far from home
Travelling apace, on my own.

Phobos and Deimos moons of Mars
Orbit faithfully among the stars
Atmosphere pink, particles of dust
Light years from earth, visit a must.

Imagination will take you there
Just sit comfortably in your chair
Close your eyes, let thoughts run free
Will meet on Mars, half-past three.

2012 Delice1941
11th December2012

Stenciled Smiles on Paper HeartsI don't like to feel this way
There must be something I can say
Cause I hate just watching you
When I know the pain you're going through

Listen…

You're not alone; I've been where you are
Contemplating where I'll place my next scar
Hiding razor kisses underneath long sleeves
It doesn't make it better; nothing is achieved

Believe me…

All you'll earn are the scars you've got and
The lesson learned is the lesson forgotten
You feel like no one's there, no one cares what you do
Let me put it to you straight: That is never true

I Know…

I was shunned, pushed away many times before
Then I realized it was I who had closed the door
I to

No Longer Just For WishingI lost myself up in the stars
A glance was all it took
The shimmering of distant realms
Stole me with just one look

The “unreachable” goals, abandoned wishes
And dreams that I once lost
Were all I needed to motivate
My nebulous inner thoughts

Unreadable, unthinkable
I jotted down with a pen
Of purple ink, now who would think?
The stars could be so grand

Give up the petty wishes
Chanted up into the night
A pair of legs, or a perhaps a page
Is what you need to fight

The stars did steal me up above
I broke the heavy gaze
For gazing is just doing nothing
Compared to devising a phrase

Like Shattered GlassBroken bones like shattered glass
Crash down to the floor.

Her screams go unnoticed
Until she falls eerily silent.

"Shhh, it's only me."

Can anyone hear?
Does anyone know?

Arms pinned above her head,
She freezes in fear.

Please let it be quick this time.
Please let this end.

Close your eyes, child
And leave your body behind.

Tapped in these moments
I cannot forget.

I will always remember, and I cannot
Sleep.

Unwanted FutureMy stomach flips,
my breathing gets deep,
I'm sorry love but
please just let me sleep?

It's hard to live
taking day by day
when it seems to pass too fast
and you struggle on the way

What future awaits me?
A small dog, swing on the deck,
the picket white fence and
a fake family in depth.

A kiss on the cheek and
lunch in paper bags,
a promise to behave
but love, the days just drag.

Will it be the same routine
that I face right now?
A fake smile and laugh
that struggle to be found.

The passion fades
with the will to explore,
and you grow older along with
the slamming of doors.

Your voice screams,
your hear

ReleasedI was chained tightly up
In my own bitter thoughts
Of endless pain and misery
Dreams filled with death

You released me

***

In your arms I fall
And forget myself again
Bitter thoughts disappear
When you gently hold me

***

My heart will be
Yours to carry for
As it'll wither away
By the day you are gone

I never felt this real

***

You made me whole forevermore

GhostThe dream shatters around me
Like a broken mirror.

Looking at the wreckage,
My reflection unrecognizable.

A broken image.
A broken heart.

I'm cut by the shards
As I try to piece it back together.

My blood sprinkles the surface
Like a red rain.

The mirror is whole again.
What's left of the dream.

I look at my reflection,
And tears finally begin to fall.

So What Do I Do?If only I could read your mind
If only I could interpret you emotions
Understand what you're going through
See through your eyes
Hear through your ears
Feel through your heart
If only I knew how to help you

But I can't
And I don't
And it's killing me
So what do I do?
Tell me.

Mute TranslucenceShe is trapped in a glass box
One which follows her every move
It is always caging her in
With invisible walls so everyone can see her inside
Yet barriers so thick no one can hear her pleas

A cry of desperation rises up from her crystalline prison
A lamenting wail so loud it threatens to shatter the mirrored bulwark

"Why won't anyone listen to me?

She listens for a response
As the crowds continue to rush past her enclosure
All brushing against the invisible walls
All seeming to forget she's there

There is no acknowledgement to her despondent appeal

but s i l e n c e

The Blame Game. The Blame Game
How about we play a game.
So we will know who is to blame.
We'll spin the dice and take a turn.
And hurt each other until it burns.

I can't believe what you have done.
Filled us with lies of Kingdom come.
You preached of a God oh so great.
Yet now it seems we are of different fates

There will be no hypocrites beyond His door.
Nor salvation for the wicked to their core.
No place for the deceitful with silver tongues
or those who have been lost since they were young.

For you who cant stand to see your mother.
Have only become a dreadful bother.
Spewing your hate from here to there.
You will one day face a life so bare.

You

Winter HeartFrozen solid, her heart will not beat,
Summer over, arctic winds won’t retreat,
All warmth and light has fled,
And you won’t last long there,
Her heart it’s a tundra in winter,
A winter heart, all dead.

The snow falling your love a breeze,
You won’t last long, you'll just freeze
Icicles from the past have froze her core,
Only warm hearts will change the season
Her heart it’s a tundra in winter
A winter heart, you've fallen for

RainDrip Drip Drip Drip Drop
The rain touches the cold earth
Clouds cover the sun

Under__________________________________
__________________________________
__________________________________
__________________________________
__________________________________

I hid from you again today

Mind numb, heart cold and freezing

I'll never have the strength to say,

It hurts when it's so easy

It's quiet in this shadow life

I lead beneath the floor

My wit's grown like a broken knife

Not useful anymore

But cutting still, despite its wear

And dangerous to handle:

The universe I carve with care,

A double-edged warm candle

The time I bought to write this out

Was stole from other tasks

Is what you'd say, without a doubt

"

God's called another angelYou were sick and tired
none of us we knew,
God had pulled the reins in
Calling home for you.

My mother and yourself
You fought so hard and long
Now that your struggles over
My mother will carry on.

I know she feels defeated
this cancer its hard to beat.
Your memory lies with her always
In every stride as she aims to defeat.

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Painful sounds..
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(Heal yourself...)

Tearing the wings away
Falling, falling..
No hope exist
Only emptiness in dark.

(Why...)

How dare you?How dare you?
I though you would know..
Would know the rules of life.

But you broke them.
Brought your sins to their minds.
Shattered their dreams..
And threw them to darkness.

How dare you?
I though you were different.
Though you would help.

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no grace for the Fallen.

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by ~ScullReaper, Nov 13, 2012, 4:19:07 PM
Literature / Poetry / Horror / Free Verse

He wishes to burn away it all
Hear the screams of the ones
Who made his heart tear apart

Blood will flow
As the sun sets
Hope will fall
As night arrives

His corrupted mind desires for eternal destruction

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As all who had hurt him now died away
His hatred yet grows deep within
As he finally starts to realize
He is the one meant to die

---

It's now the time to break his own mind

My purpose is to be undone
As all my decisions
Lead to misery
Hate
And despair...

I am the one to blame

He feels so numb
Lost he is forevermore

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He slits his wrists open
Laughs as the blood flows
Forming a crimson river
On the frost ground

No tears he will shed
As his bones break
His body starts to fail
He falls on his knees

He lays crippled
With a broken heart
And finally he knows
He has ended it all

---

I chose the wrong way...

Wrathby ~ScullReaper

Literature / Poetry / Horror / Free Verse

If someone ever gets the purpose and true meaning of this poem... that someone knows very deeply how I feel.

Critique by ~Laur-icula Nov 16, 2012, 1:27:59 PM

This is one of the most powerful poems I have ever read. The meaning is practically jumping off of the screen. Such sadness, guilt, self-hatred. They are all right in front of the readers eyes. The world flow is fantastic, and you managed to tell an entire story in just twelve simple stanzas. I don't normally read poetry because it's not my favorite genre, but you made it enjoyable for me; though the meaning is very upsetting. I'm pretty positive I understand the meaning of this poem. So I will most likely note you, if that's okay with you dear.

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~ChibiNeko112 Dec 28, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

This is lovely. It ultimately broke my heart with it's beauty. It's so real. And it's your knowledge of reality that makes you beautiful.

~ScullReaper Dec 31, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Thank you

~ChibiNeko112 Jan 11, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

You're welcome.

~InLoveWithUtopia Nov 20, 2012 Student Artisan Crafter

Quite a nice piece, truly fine.

~ScullReaper Nov 20, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Thank you

~XxFrozen Nov 17, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

I seem to be the only one that doesn't really get this. Yes, it's dark, and yes, not everyone will get the message behind it with the first reading, but I'm not seeing exceptionally high quality here.

A lot of the wording is awkward, like "Who made his heart tear apart" which sounds like it's in the wrong order (maybe "who tore his heart apart") and "As all who had hurt him now died away" which uses past in "has" and "died" but then present in "now." To me, this was very distracting from the feeling the poem was trying to convey.

I do know that poetry is a form of journal-writing for some people, and that's what this seems to be - exceptionally personal and individual. However, this also makes it difficult to relate to. I think I have the same problem in my writing, and it's difficult to get past that, but it is a definite direction to work towards.

~ScullReaper Nov 19, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Eh?

~Dragonmark01 Nov 16, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

I get it... Please, note me. I want to talk to you.

~ScullReaper Nov 16, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Note me.. I dunno what to say.

~Rowlingson39 Nov 15, 2012 Student Writer

Oh man I LOVE THIS

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